i really like your color and details, and the bone structures are spot on, but working on making shadows would really make your already amazing drawings even better. also, i hate to be a nit-picker but i think you need to make sure you erase all lines completely, like the ones behind the reeds. plus, victorie and lilly's hair is blowing but rose's isn't really and neither are the reeds, so you have a few minor continuity errors. but i know no matter what you do different or the same your drawings will only become even more amazing. ROCK ON BURDGE BUG!!
I am very impressed, I love how this came out, it is amazing like the rest of your art. The cousins are amazing, but maybe I would work on how you draw their ages. I cannot exactly figure out how old they are supposed to be. Other than that, I really love it.
I love the colors you have chosen.
Please continue to draw them.
Keep the amazing work up! ~S A R A H 8 3 _ D I S T R I C T 3 (A N D I T I S B E C A U S E O F T H A T)