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Siren by burdge Siren by burdge
damn those lines.

dr. frankenstein: DAMN YOUR EYES!
igor: too late. :)
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Just fantastic! I love pencil sketches especially those on something as simple as notebook paper.

When a drawn body comes to life on the page, the artist has succeeded! YOU have succeed. This picture has amazing life. It is full of energy and makes me happy when I look at it. Her body exudes energy and excitement.

One thing I always admired about Klimt's notebook drawings were his ability to bring hands and feet to life with a mere pencil. You have done the same! Her entire body has life. The eyes and the smile are the finishing touch. :)

Lovely. just wonderful!
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Ok, well this is the first time ive done a critique. i think you did AMAZING! I love the detaul that was obviously put into this. I only have two problems with it. one, its on notebook paper. i dont know why i dont like that, but i dont. the other thing is that theres no color! i really wouldve liked to see some color added to it, but i still think it looks beautiful. very original! i dont think ive ever seen anything like it :) Really, everything else seems perfect. i love the look that she has on her face, it really fits the description of a siren from greek mythology for me. keep it up! i wish i could draw as well as you do :)
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this-is-a-paradox Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Student Artist
I know this is old now, but I really love this and I wonder why I've never seen it before! I love the wispyness of it and (I know this will sound weird but) the feet look really great. You are truly a master! I love that face!! Your shading is brilliant!
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Dercce Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012
I love the way she looks like she's floating, it's so cool! I think you could've totally called her a witch/fairy/angel just as easily. You rock!
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Bob-loves-PIE Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012
Wow. Beautiful.
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HoneyBadger12 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
This is amazing
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KandiSOUL Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hahaha i saw that movie yesterday! so funny!!! and great picture :worship:
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Angry-Hippo Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is really pretty, and I like it a lot. She has a sort of coy and mischievous look that fits the Sirens of Greek myth. Only thing is around some of the lighter parts, you can see where the pencil made marks instead of it being uniform. Other than that, though, great job!
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buzzjh Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Student General Artist
The lines make it look cooler
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ChammiBee Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
looks like the description of the lady in the river when Percy meets her underwater(forgot the flippin name!) but yeah... Poseidon's messenger or some shiz...
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heartsfanatic Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012  Student Writer
i love this <3
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DenraWaterWolf Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012
I love it, very sassy and saucy! I hate when you draw something awesome on lined paper and you’re all LINES?!?!? WHY DO YOU BETRAY ME!?!
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thomasms Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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VictoriaMota13 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!! ...... BIG fan!!!!
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Lady-Dracoleo101 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Student General Artist
WOW! Very nice!
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pbwik Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Ahahaha i love young frankenstien
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xXCrazyMehXx Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
yeah same, I actually think sketches on lined paper( you know what I mean) are better in a lot of ways, but of course other paper is great to!
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Annabeth-Everdeen Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011
i know someone already wrote this somewhere but is this from the book siren
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Chantelaine13 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful! nice comment I love Young Frankenstein :D
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pandachick700 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2011  Student Digital Artist
so cute :)
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Jinx-kun Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2011
such a gourgious drawing, you're such an amzing artist
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lizzie-misa Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2011
you are fantastic :O i am a big big fan <3
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lizzie-misa Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2011
you are fantastic :O i am a big big fan <3
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rudi98 Featured By Owner May 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
is this from the book si3en i loved it and good drawing and i thonk its from that book
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rocknroll-candy Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2011
yeah! go young frankenstein! :B
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teffisty105 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
gorgeous!! :D this is amazing!
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cosmic-jaguar Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
damn thats good
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Mae-Starling Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
love that movie...............dr. frankenstein: what knockers!
Inga: oh! thank you doctor
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desigual-is-like Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011
I made a brochure in my English class for the Siren's Island, and this would have been absolutely perfect! It's gorgeous. Her face just whispers come here to me.
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lilymoon114 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2011
Incredibly perfect. Especially the skirt, the lines are fantastic!
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Artistocraft Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011
Rawr! loving those folds.
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GraveSonnet Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i love it. i recommend computer paper. its light weight and hard to have pencil smudge. also it does not have those damned lines lol. i used to use notebook paper at first and then i moved to sketch pads but now its computer paper all the way.

the woman is wonderful. the only flaw i see are the bubbles...but no one can draw a perfect bubble.
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ChikaMegumi Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2011
i like how you depict her.
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balletXoxO13 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2010
YOUNG FRANKENSTEIN! <3
Looking at you're 14 year old version or yourself reminds me of well...me hahaha i hope to be able to develope my own style like you have:)

*looking at castle door*
Dr. Frederick Frankenstein: What knockers...
Inga: Oh, thank you doctor.
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somefreakofnature Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2010
I was wondering if i could use this for my digital graphics class (put this on adobe illustator/photoshop and make it look cool) since its SOOOO GOOOOD (minus lines, and funny block toes...and slightly large head) that makes it look sketchyish) BUT OTHER THAN THAT ITS REALLY REALLY AMAZING. So can i borrow it? (you'll be put as the original artist)
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somefreakofnature Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2010
I was wondering if i could use/borrowkinda this for my project at school since its FRIGGING AMAZING (even with lines) .

Its for my digital graphics class (learn adobe illus/photo/animationblahblvhjkasdfjadshfh)

so may i borrow please? :)
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purplemoo Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2010
that is reely good. i know i say that every time though!
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Grigori77 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2010  Professional General Artist
Lines be damned ... :XD: it's still great ... ;)
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missnikaty Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you have an amazing sense of ligth and shadow and you know the humam body soooooo weellllllll.... wow
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thomasms Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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ivyflightislistening Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2010
love her mischievous smile!
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chasingpaper Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2010
Lovely! Your style of drawing is great (:
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SHarlequin Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2010
I did just an amazing piece on lined paper too. And the worst part? You can never seem to recreate it.
All lines aside, this is fantastic. The expression is luring and the hair... Ah, the hair...
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kendallkimosabe Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2010
okay, i'm pretty that was a young frankenstein quote, which makes me love you even more in a not-creepy-way. even if i'm mistaken, this is pretty frigging good just like everything else you draw.
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TaangLuver Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2010
ok seriously? your freakin AMAZING!!! jeez im jealous :( lol but anyways, your really really really good!!
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EstrangeloEdessa Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Ah, notebook paper—the Great Enemy of Artists Worldwide! I am proud to see that you, fellow artist, have overcome this terrible evil and triumphed in your goal!
Really, that's great. She looks so realistic; there's not a line out of place. The shading is beautiful—on her dress, of course, but I'm far more impressed with the face. It's just perfect.
And now I, OCD me, have noticed something. Her face is so real it could have been taken from a photograph, and applaud you. But then her feet! Her feet!
They're wonderful feet, really, but they just don't match the face... do you understand what I mean? They're more cartoonish. Which isn't bad, it just (grr) doesn't match the face!
Now my OCD rant is over, and I can get back to compliments. :) It's wonderful how floaty the dress and hair are. They make it look like she's floating in water. Also, I love the expression on her face—beguiling and mischievous. She really does look like a Siren who'll charm a ship into dangerous water.
Applause all around!
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pearl4453 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Holy dessert, you're here TOO?

Notice how I said dessert, meaning I'm not specifying brownies or muffins.
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EstrangeloEdessa Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
NO I'M NOT! *shifty eyes shifty eyes*

I noticed. Coward. :P
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pearl4453 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
COWARD? :iconraegplz:

I WILL TELL YOU WHO I SUPPORT! I SUPPORT-

All desserts and pastries. Have a nice day!
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EstrangeloEdessa Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
You are therefore a Brownie supporter and must die.
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