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all i ever wanted

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there's kind of a story behind this, but
i don't even know how to put it. the sea and the
sky are simply in love. and when there's a storm,
they crash together. :love:

Oh, all I ever wanted was to see you smiling,
All I ever wanted was to make you mine.
I know that I love you, oh baby why don't you see
That all I ever wanted was you and me?

Basshunter
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

WOW! this made quite an impact on me! I love the concept of the ocean and the sky...pure forbidden love! I can really read the emotions on the faces, and I think that your idea was a VERY good one! But, as this is a critique, I have to tell you about some things you could have done better. The colors of the man and the sea should have been a little more blended. Putting a little more darker blue fading around the torso would've helped this. On the sky, I loved how you wrapped the clouds around her arms like a sleeve, however, you could have added to the 'cloud clothes' a little more draping. I love the people in the drawing, but the background behind them could use some work. You could have put some stray tiny clouds, a little more blending of the blue, or some more layered different blues. Overall, I loved it! Great artwork!
Wow, writing a critique takes some scrutiny and work!